2012年6月四六级名师指导：5个句子掌握18个写作得分词汇
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5个句子掌握18个写作得分词汇
1. This problem has caused hot discussion among people.
单词problem可以替换为issue（指引起人们探讨、关注的社会、政治性事件和问题）；单词cause表示"导致"，可以替换为短语give rise to；单词hot，可以替换为heated，表示"热烈的"。People表示人们、人民大众，可以用单词"the public"更为精确。
整容后：
This issue has given rise to heated discussion among the public.
2. Many people think that environmental protection is very important.
Many 表示很多，有很多词组可以替换，比如a considerable number of ,更加高级的还有 an astonishing(惊人的) number of；think 表示"认为"，单词hold、argue、maintain 都比think 更加高级；important "重要"，可以用of great significance替换；
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An astonishing number of people argue that environmental protection is of great significance.
3. For example, More and more fresh students realize that finding a good job will be more and more difficult nowadays.
For example,举例，可以用更好的for instance，也是举例；more and more 后如果接的是名词，可以用 名词+ in
mounting numbers的方式替换；good表示好，好可以有很多种好，这里的好"工作"的好，可以用decent（体面的），也可以用satisfactory（令人满意的），也可以用ideal（理想的）等等；will be 将会，可以改成 tends to be "往往会"；more and more 后面接形容词，可以改成increasingly；nowadays 现在，改成in this day and age"当今, 在我们今天生活的时代"
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For instance，fresh students in mounting numbers realize that finding a(an) decent/satisfactory/ideal job tends to be increasingly difficult in this day and age.
4. It goes without saying that the governments should pay attention to the education situation in poverty-stricken areas.
It goes without saying that 表示"毫无疑问…"可以改成there is no denying that ….（无可否认）、也可以改成no one can deny the fact that （无可否认）；governments政府，可以用单词authorities,也表示"政府、官方"替换；pay attention to 表示注意，可以用词组 attach great emphasis to ；
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There is no denying that / No one can deny the fact that the authorities should attach great emphasis to the education situation in poverty-stricken areas.
5. As we all know, mass unemployment will cause social upheaval because the public can not ensure a basic livelihood.
As we all know 众所周知，可以改成it is widely acknowledged；because 表示"因为"，可以改成for the reason that。
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It is widely acknowledged that mass unemployment will cause social upheaval for the reason that the public can not ensure a basic livelihood.
大学英语四、六级考试 --- 六级写作备考资料编辑：郭英杰）
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