武汉新东方：201212六级作文原题解析及原创范文赏析

　　武汉新东方：201212六级作文原题解析及原创范文赏析

　　本次考试首次采用“多题多卷”，目前六级的两个版本写作真题如下：
　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Computer and Man by commenting on the saying, “It is not a real danger that the computer thinks like man, but that man thinks like the computer.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on the saying, “It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
　　有了去年12月份谚语格言题的撑腰，无论今年手气如何，两道类似谚语格言题目都是同学们可以hold住的。鉴于与网络相关的话题在课堂上作为重点讲解过，而且今年6月份也考察的是网络话题，故笔者在此将重点讲解on maintaining trust.
　　首先是审题问题。我曾经在课上讲过，15秒钟必须进入动笔写作的状态，否则时间上来不及！这就需要考察同学们的词汇量了，有同学不认识maintain，以为是mountain,将之译为“山的信任”，结果就会让人贻笑大方。
　　其次是开始写作。根据上课笔记，谚语格言题一定记得多举例，在第一段引出社会现象后，第二段可以用通俗的总分结构，分析两点原因，但是最好用到举例论证，用一个大例子替代其中一点原因，第三段也易如反掌。老规矩，总分总结构，最后一定要喊口号或者展望未来，在课堂上都反复提及，也亲自给同学们当场操练过。
　　最后就是检查了，作文要拿高分，首先保证正确，记得刻意检查下单词拼写，主谓一致，单复数变化等细节问题，力求完美，做一百分的自己。
　　除此之外，这次六级考题再次关注了网络科技相关话题和精神品质类话题，接连两次考察网络话题，让那些认为不会连考类似话题的做侥幸心理的同学措手不及，因此建议各位同学在以后的复习过程中，要做到精益求精，高标准要求自己。
　　随附为笔者拙作一篇，还望能各位同学一点点帮助和启发：
　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on the saying, “It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
　　The contemporary society has witnessed a worrying phenomenon that trust crisis been a grave problem with which this nation confronted, which has given rise to the prevalent and pervasive situation that maintaining trust has been put on the top of our agenda. Just as the saying goes, “It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it.” which means either a community or a person should mind its or his behavior; otherwise, the hard-gained good reputation will evaporate in a minute.
　　As a side-effect of the prosperity of the market economy, the absence of trust is partly owing to the dishonesty and moral corruption of some businessmen and manufacturers who manufacture or sale shoddy and unqualified products in the pursuit of a bigger profit, which results in the loss of credibility between. History abounds with examples to testify the truth of this saying. I can think of no better illustration of than what has happened to KFC recently. As one of the most famous fast-food restaurants in the world, it is being doubted in China because of its problematic chicken. Indeed, the company has endeavored very vigorously in the past years to erect a positive image in this country: calling for donations to the underprivileged groups, sponsoring sports events and the like. However, the entire mansion of its reputation collapsed in seconds after the news spread wildly online that its raw materials are doubtable in quality. Were this situation to continue, we human beings would live in a torment, or a cold, dull, meaningless and misery world.
　　In view of the seriousness of this adverse problem, effective measures must be taken to address this issue. The first and most important one is that powerful laws and regulations should be enacted and enforced to ban various dishonest behaviors. What’s more, in the process of interacting, the public should cultivate the awareness of patience, impartiality, integrity, modesty, willingness, and above all, sincerity to others, which can all contribute greatly to eliminating apathy and coldness. At every step, weigh in mind the significance that our behaviors have to the future. And remember, Rome was not built in a day, but it can be destroyed overnight.
　　2012年新题型写作解析：
　　一、表格图图表作文的写作要点
　　1、横向比较。介绍横向各个数据的区别，变化和趋势
　　2、不需要将每一个数据分别说明，突出强调数据最大值和最小值
　　3、最对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的
　　二、曲线图图表作文的写作要点
　　1、极点说明。即对图表当中最高的，最低的点要单独进行说明
　　2、趋势说明。即对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明，如上升，下降，波动，持平
　　3、交点说明。即对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明
　　三、饼状图图表雅思[微博]作文的写作要点
　　1、介绍各扇面及总体的关系
　　2、各个扇面之间的比较，同类扇面在不同时间，不同地点的比较
　　3、重点突出特点最明显的扇面：最大的，最小的，互相成倍的
　　四、综合图图表作文的写作要点
　　1、不求甚解，不拘泥于细节
　　2、分门别类，分段落详细介绍各个图表
　　3、不画蛇添足，主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系
　　名师简介：
　　韩勤勤，武汉新东方国内考试部优秀教师。主讲四六级写作，考研写作。英语语言学研究生，英语专业八级，获上海市高级口译资格证书，英语功底扎实，课堂教学生动充实，为人亲和，让学生如沐春风，被学生亲切地唤为“观音姐姐”。
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