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新东方四级作文点评:拿什么拯救你—我“任性”的作文

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  2014年12月20日,大学英语四六级考试结束当日,频道第一时间更新公布英语四六级真题答案,并特别邀请多位新东方名师为广大考生进行考后试题解析。同时广大考生还可随时微博,与线上老师以及考生随时互动答疑,最后新东方祝广大考生在此次考试中取得优异成绩!

  2014年12月20日的四级作文再次验证了没有扎实的写作功底,只在乎模板的同学会在今年的四级作文中被"任性"的出题者击败。但是如果回顾2014年6月14日的四级作文,我们会发现其实两次考试都重在考查大家生活中英语应用的能力。去年三套题目分别是,介绍中国,家乡以及校园。今年四级作文共分三套卷,①印象最深的一个同学 ②大学获益最多的校园活动 ③印象最深的一门课。其实就是介绍信(推荐信)的一种,和六月份的考题如出一辙。
  在大连新东方最后的冲刺班中,我们的讲授的考题是:给朋友推荐中国古典文学,只要大家直接改成课程名称为中国古典文学或者英国古典文学,并在行文中把人称换成"我",那么③大学获益最多的一门课,写法可以保持完全一致。而其他两道题目也是同样的写作思路。


新东方张玲点评四级作文:拿什么拯救你—我“任性”的作文   Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a person that has impressed you most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  My most impressive friend  (我印象最深刻的朋友)
  During my four years in the university, a great many classmates and teachers have exerted a positive influence on me and rendered me instant assistance when I got into trouble. Among those unforgettable people, Yin Fang, one of my roommates, is the most impressive one and leaves me numerous sweet memories.
  At the beginning of new term, the first roommate I met in the university was Yin Fang who seemed to be accustomed to living on campus and encouraged me to adapt to the new environment as soon as possible. From that day on, we have become best friends in spite of occasional quarrels for trifles in life. In terms of character, my friend, optimistic and kindhearted, always wore a friendly smile on her face, which made her popular among students. Most importantly, as the elder sister in her family, she took several part-time jobs during university in order to relieve burden of her parents and afford her own tuition fees.
  The acquaintance with my best friend, Yin Fang, is one of my luckiest things in my life. The first day on campus is the start of an enduring friendship, and I firmly believe that the friendship between us will be everlasting although we will be separated in different corners of the world after graduation.
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a campus activity that has benefited you most. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  The most beneficial campus activity  (获益最多的一次活动)
  As a college student in the contemporary society, it is necessary for us to get ourselves equipped with professional knowledge but more importantly, to learn to adapt to the competitive society through a series of campus activities, among which the English Speech Contest held by Students' Union last term leaves me a deep impression.
  In the first place, the judge of the contest named Bob, one of the most influential professors in the field of English contest, has published a range of authoritative books. Inspired by his detailed comments and shocked by his authentic pronunciation, all of the students present could not only correct mistakes in pronunciation and intonation, but also gain a better understanding of skills in speech contest. Moreover, it is the contest that enabled me to get acquainted with many friends with common interests. Since that day, we have become best friends and encouraged each other frequently.
  It is my honor to be one of members in the competition, from which I have realized that benign competition is a key factor to improve our own capacity.
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a course that has impressed you most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  My most impressive course   (我印象最深刻的课程)
  During my four years on campus, there are a host of amazing courses worth recommending, such as Psychology, Management and Accounting, but what really leaves a deep impression on me is English literary classic.
  Several reasons accounting for my recommendation can be listed as follows. In the first place, the teacher named Bob, one of the most influential experts in the field of English literary classic, has gained rich experience in teaching and enjoyed wide popularity among students. I believe every student could not only gain a better understanding of English traditional culture, but also stimulate interests in English. Moreover, the reason why I am fascinated with the course is that culture itself is acknowledged as the symbol of a whole nation, which enables us students to know much about differences between Chinese and English customs.

  To sum up, so attractive and fascinating is the course that I believe everybody will fall in love with it and benefit a great deal from learning English literary classic.

  作者:大连新东方 张玲
  主讲:四六级、考研写作;四六级语法





大学英语四、六级考试 --- 四级真题

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