四级作文平时积累(12)
四级作文平时积累(12)
Directions:
Write a composition entitled The Influence of Movies. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.电影已成为人们主要的休闲方式之一；
2.电影对人们生活的影响；
3.我们应该如何对待电影。
【步骤构思】
步骤1：
审题：这是一篇以电影为主题的议论文。
步骤2：
引入话题：简述电影的影响越来越大；
展开话题：详述电影对人们生活的影响；
话题结论：要注意电影带来的消极影响。
【作文背诵范文】
The Influence of Movies
Nowadays, it seems that people are spending more and more time watching some sort of visual entertainment, whether it is television, a video tape or a DVD. There is no doubt that watching movies has become one of the main entertainments today and can influence the way that people behave. Therefore, the influence of movies cannot be ignored.
现如今，人们似乎把越来越多的时间花在观看某种视觉娱乐节目上，不管是电视、录影带或是DVD 。毫无疑问，看电影已成为今天主要的娱乐方式之一，并且能影响人们的行为方式。因此，电影的影响不容忽视。
Firstly, there are more and more advertisements before the movies. For example, I have experienced thirty minutes' advertisements before the movie began. Secondly, the movies affect people is that they give people either a broader view of the world or an interesting one, depending on what type of programs they choose. For instance, those who watch news and educational programs can learn new things while those who watch entertainment shows can have great fun. Finally, perhaps the most susceptible viewers are children, who may be unable to tell fact from fiction and may try to imitate acts that they see in the movies.
首先，电影前的广告越来越多。例如，我就经历过一次，在电影开始前有三十分钟的广告。其次，电影对人们的影响是，电影为人们提供更广阔的视野，或者更有趣的视野，这由他们选择的节目类型决定。比如，那些看新闻和教育节目的人能学到新的东西，而那些看娱乐秀的人能获得乐趣。最后，也许最易受影响的观众就是孩子了。他们也许还不能区分事实和虚构，而且可能会模仿他们在电影中看到的动作。
In conclusion, with the ever-increasing popularity of movies, the influence is also tremendous and overwhelming. Besides the positive influence, we should pay more attention to the negative influence. (189 words)
总之，随着看电影的人群日益壮大，电影的影响也变得很巨大而且势不可挡。除了积极方面的影响，我们应该注意它们消极方面的影响。
【高分句型解析】
Finally, perhaps the most susceptible viewers are children, who may be unable to tell fact from fiction and may try to imitate acts that they see in the movies.最后，也许最易受影响的观众就是孩子了。他们也许还不能区分事实和虚构，而且可能会模仿他们在电影中看到的动作。
点评：这是一个非限制性定语从句，who引导的非限制性定语从句作children的定语。
…the influence is also tremendous and overwhelming.……电影的影响也变得很巨大而且势不可挡。
点评：这句话中用了"tremendous"和"overwhelming"两个大词，使得文章显得很正式，在四级写作中如果能准确运用一些这样的词也是一个得高分的亮点。
【作文加分词】
some sort of 某种
susceptible [sə'septəbl] adj.易受影响的
ever-increasing [,evər,in'kri:siŋ] adj.不断增多的
tremendous [trə'mendəs] adj.巨大的
overwhelming [,ouvər'welmiŋ] adj.势不可挡的
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