备战2015四级作文篇(44)
备战2015四级作文篇(44)
Directions:
Write a composition entitled Advertisements. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.广告深入人们的生活;
2.广告的形式多种多样;
3.广告带来的弊端。
【步骤构思】
步骤1:
审题:这是一篇以广告为主题的说明文。
步骤2:
引入话题:概述广告的影响已经深入大人生活;
展开话题:介绍广告的多种形式,说明广告的弊端;
话题结论:总结全文,采取正确的态度对待广告。
【作文背诵范文】
Advertisements
Advertisements are making their way into people's lives. People are influenced by advertisers when choosing what to buy whether they are conscious of it or not.
广告正在逐渐深入人们的生活。当选择购买什么商品时,人们受到了广告商的影响,不管他们是否意识到这一点。
Advertising is a flourishing industry now, and it comes in different forms. There are advertisements published on newspapers, commercials on television or radio. Billboards also carry advertising. To some extent, good advertising means success while bad advertising means failure.
如今广告业已成为兴旺发展的行业,它的形式多种多样。有些广告刊登在报纸上,有些则出现在电视或广播节目中。布告栏处也会张贴广告。某种程度而言,一则好的广告意味着成功,而差劲的广告意味着失败。
However, advertisements also have the shortcomings. Whether the information they carry is true or not has become a major problem. From one angel, the advertiser intends to exaggerate the benefits of his own products. From the other angel, some consumers are cheated and become victims of such advertising.
然而,广告也有一些弊端。它们所传达的信息是否属实,这已成为了一个主要的问题。从一方面看,广告商欲夸大自己产品的功效;从另一个方面看,一些消费者受到了欺骗,沦为这种广告的受害者。
Thus, as customers, when facing an appealing advertisement, we should be clearheaded.(126 words)
因此,作为消费者,当面对一则极具吸引力的广告时,我们应该保持头脑清醒。
【高分句型解析】
Billboards also carry advertising. 布告栏处也会张贴广告。
点评:这句话中活用了动词“carry”,使原本没有生命的Billboards有了动感。
…good advertising means success while bad advertising means failure. ……一则好的广告意味着成功,而差劲的广告意味着失败。
点评:这句话中转折连词“while”连接两个对等的成分,使前后对比鲜明。
【作文加分词】
be conscious of… 知道……
flourishing ['flʌriʃiŋ] adj.繁荣的
billboard ['bilbɔ:rd] n.广告板,布告栏
shortcoming ['ʃɔ:rtkʌmiŋ] n.缺点,毛病
exaggerate [ig'zædʒəreit] v.夸大,夸张
victim ['viktim] n.受害者
clear-headed [,klir'hədid] adj.头脑清醒的
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