备战2015四级作文篇(53)
Directions:
Write a composition entitled The Importance of Interpersonal Communication. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.每个人都需要与他人交流；
2.人际交流的重要性；
3.结论。
【步骤构思】
步骤1：
审题：这是一篇以人际交流为主题的解释说明文。
步骤2：
引入话题：简述人际交往在社会和企业中的重要作用；
展开话题：从三方面分析人际交往如此重要的原因；
话题结论：总结人际交往的重要性。
【作文背诵范文】
The Importance of Interpersonal Communication
The 21st century, is an age of information and knowledge. In such an age, interpersonal communication plays an increasingly important role both in the society and in a corporation.
21世纪是信息和知识的时代。在这样一个时代，人际交流在社会和企业中发挥着越来越重要的作用。
Why is interpersonal communication so important? There are some reasons contributing to this new trend. First, it helps people to understand each other better and clean up misunderstanding. For example, in a family, communication makes the family members get closer owing to the mutual understanding. Second, it helps people get more information and knowledge. Students can learn more effectively if they can communicate more with his teachers and classmates. As for leaders or professionals need more information which largely depends on their communicative channels. Third, without the interpersonal communication, our life would become a desert lack of emotion and friendship. Last but not the least, communication between people makes our life lively, interesting and lovely.
为什么人际交流如此重要呢?这一新趋势的出现有一些原因。首先，它有助于人们更好地相互理解和扫清误解。例如，在一个家庭中，由于互相理解，家庭成员之间关系更密切了。第二，它帮助人们获得更多的信息和知识。如果学生可以多与他们的老师和同学沟通，他们就可以更有效地学习。作为领导者或专业人士需要更多的信息，这些在很大程度上依赖于他们的沟通渠道。第三，没有人际交流，我们的生活会变得像沙漠一样缺乏情感和友谊。最后同样重要的是，人与人之间的沟通使我们的生活生动、有趣、愉悦。
In a word, humans, as social animals, have to communicate with each other, the importance of which can never be overemphasized. (168 words)
总之，人类作为社会动物，必须相互沟通，其重要性再怎么强调也不过分。
【高分句型解析】
…without the interpersonal communication, our life would become a desert lack of emotion and friendship. ……没有人际交流，我们的生活会变得像沙漠一样缺乏情感和友谊。
点评：这个句子从语法上分析是一个虚拟语气的句子，前面省略了引导词if，从修辞的角度看，又是一个比喻句，把生活比喻成沙漠，使得句子的内容更清晰明了，这也是写作中的一个亮点。
【作文加分词】
corporation [,kɔ:rpə'reiʃn] n.公司
clean up misunderstanding 消除误解
owing to 由于
mutual ['mju:tʃuəl] adj.共同的，相互的
channel ['tʃænl] n.通道，消息渠道
desert ['dezərt] n.沙漠，荒地
overemphasized [,ouvər'emfəsaiz] adj.过份强调的 v.过份强调
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