四级作文分类:从真题中可以学点啥?(1)
Topic 1 2006年12月真题
Directions: For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Spring Festival Gala. You should write at least 120 words following the outline liven below:
1.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节晚会
2.有些人提出取消春节晚会
3.我的看法
Spring Festival Gala on CCTV
As regards the Spring Festival Gala there has been a heated discussion among the general in public in our society. People who believe in-its necessity argue that the Spring Festival Gala performed on CCTV on New Year's Eve presenting grand sight and sound has already been considered as an indispensable custom by many Chinese people.
By contrast，others hold that the 4-hour show is gradually losing its appeal and should he canceled. The past two decades has witnessed a steady decrease in the number of people watching the Spring Festival Gala from 943 , 500 , 000 to 728 , 500 , 000.With the roaring development of economy，various mass media come out like bamboo shoots after spring rain，making it increasingly difficult to cater to all tastes.
As far as I am concerned，I prefer the program to stay. Served as an occasion for families to get together, the Spring Festival Gala is a tradition and treasure of the Chinese people.(153词)
【“一句话”点评】
毫无疑问，第二段中的两个数据将首先吸引阅卷老师的眼球，同时该句还使用了decade , witness , steady等亮点词和watching分词短语做后置定语，这将给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。应该注意的是:比较对照型的第一段往往已经有了一个比较长的模板句，所以建议将“一句话”放在第二段。
【快捷构思】
从本范文三段之间的篇幅对比和画线部分模板词句来看，比较对照型的整篇构思清晰明了。而且，除第一段第一句为模板句引人话题外，其他段落首句皆为段落中心句(即题目所给提纲)，第一段第二句前半句紧跟其后的为段落中心，完全符合“黄金3原则”的谋篇原则。
第一段:在模板句引人话题后接着提出首段中心“有些人喜欢(认为有必要举行)春节晚会”，并用presenting grand sight and sound和be considered as an indispensable custom by many Chinese people两个原因来支持段落中心。
第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“也有些人提出要取消春节晚会”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示，说明越来越多的人不喜欢了。最后呈现人们不喜欢的原因:媒体暴增，晚会不能满足人们的各种口味了。
第三段:直接展现自己的观点，并简要提出一个原因，不做更深层次的展开。
【美丽词句】
(1) presenting grand sight and sound展现美好的视听盛宴
(2)indispensable不可缺少的(优于necessary , important等表达)
(3)lose its appeal失去吸引力(如要表达“对……有吸引力”则用sth. appeal to sb.)
(4)come out like bamboo shoots after spring rain像雨后春笋般呈现出来
(5)increasingly逐渐地，越来越……(优于全国人民都习惯使用的more and more )
(6)cater to all tastes满足各种日味
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