2015年12月四级翻译练习(29)
【原文】
火锅(hot pot)是中国的传统饮食方式之一,拥有几千年的历史。在寒冷的冬天,人们軎欢吃能立即暖身和提神的火锅。如今在许多现代家庭里,用煤炭加热的(coal-heated)传统火锅已经被电磁炉(induction cooker)火锅所取代。各地火锅风格各异,所使用的火锅原料也不尽相同。-般来说,用于火锅的肉类包括猪肉、牛肉、鸡肉、鸭肉等,其他的菜则包括蔬菜、蘑菇、面条等。
【解析】
1.第1句中含有“是……”和“拥有……”两个动宾结构,如果沿用原结构翻译,则略显生硬,故将“拥有几千年的历史”用介词短语with a history of…来表达,使句子结构简练且符合英语表达习惯。
2.第2句中的定语“能立即暖身和提神的”较长,可用引导的定语从句来表达,“暖身”和“提神”可译成两个并列的动宾成分,表达为that instantly warms their bodies and lifts their spirits.
3.第4句“各地火锅风格各异,所使用的火锅原料也不尽相同”,此句的实际意义为—火锅风格和火锅原料因地方不同而不同,英语中”因……而异有vary from…to…的表达方式,故此处可表达为hot pot styles and ingredients vary from region to region.
4.最后一句中的定语“用于火锅的”按英文表达习惯,可将其处理成“肉类”的后置定语used for hot pot,由于通篇讲的都是hot pot的话题,故此处可省略for hot pot,以避免重复 嗦,使行文言简意赅。
【参考译文】
With a history of several thousand years, hot pot is one of the traditional Chinese diets. In the cold winter,people like to eat the hot pot that instantly warms their bodies and lifts their spirits. Today in many modern homes,the traditional coal-heated hotpots have been replaced by induction cookers.Hotpot styles and ingredients vary from region to region in China. Generally, the common meats used include pork, beef, chicken, duck and others, while other hot pot dishes are vegetables, mushrooms, noodles, etc.
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